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Muddy Back and Blue Sweater - Kylie Chan

The gloom set into my mind as I

Slowed down because

I wasn’t good enough


I run away because I can’t

I’m not enough and

It’s not fair


And you’re there

Running by my side

Slower and makes me smile


I run with you and we talk

Ask about our days

Soft smiles and cross country conversations


Splashing in puddles

Laughing in the wind

You promised me it’d be okay


So we run into the distance

Side by side, stride by stride

And I wonder


What does it look like from behind?

Does it look like what I want it to look like?

Or just a muddy back and a blue sweater?


Please give a detailed explanation about the meaning and main idea of this poem.


running and romance; what things could be if things could change.


Please explain your writing and thought process regarding this poem.


Based on a mid morning run without the future on my mind


Why did you choose to write this poem?


English assignment and sudden creativity


Do you have any tips or anything to share with the youth writers who may be reading this?


write with your heart


 
 
 

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