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Plastic Stars - By: Shanelle Savard

When I was 8, my parents gave me bright, plastic stars,

That shimmered on twilight skin as brightly lit scars.

Innocence woven in my room’s night sky,

Where a passion for stars would endlessly fly.

When I was 10, I was bedridden and in awe,

Staring at constellations, naming each one that I saw.

My room, a haven where galaxies would play,

A mere spectator of their astral display.

When I was 12, my parents gave me a bright, plastic phone.

A shift occurred, innocence overthrown.

The stars above, once my steadfast guide,

Found competition, in a glowing tide.

When I was 14, stardust’s plea fell on deaf ears.

The stars grew dimmer, shedding lonely tears.

The soul’s ancient captivation, now a flickering jest,

In the screen's harsh glow, their cries suppressed.

When I was 16, the stars didn’t shine anymore.

Their zinc sulphide glow had been ignored.

Turned to memories in the night’s embrace,

As my phone’s glow stole their once-vibrant grace.

Now at 17, I long for those nights of yore,

When the stars were my solace, my heart's true core.

Why I turned away from their beauty, I can’t explain,

Now I yearn, oh, if only they'd remain.

I shine a light on them, their glow to resuscitate,

Hoping their chemicals will reignite, illuminate.

But even if they don’t glow tonight,

They’re just plastic stars,

right?


Please give a detailed explanation about the meaning and main idea of this poem.


This poem subtly touches on the theme of light pollution and portrays the speaker's evolving relationship with stars, from a childhood fascination to a disconnection caused by the introduction of technology. The shift from the plastic stars to a plastic phone symbolizes the intrusion of artificial light into the speaker's appreciation of the natural night sky. The dimming of the stars' glow and the speaker's longing to revive their brilliance allude to the impact of light pollution on stargazing experiences. The poem captures the bittersweet nostalgia for the pure connection with the cosmos that has been overshadowed by the presence of urban light.


Please explain your writing and thought process regarding this poem.


The poem “Plastic Stars” was born from my love for the celestial wonders that adorn our night sky. Although my affection for stars remains, the hustle of modern life leaves me with little time for stargazing. When I do have moments beneath the open sky, the radiance of city lights obscures the brilliance of the stars, rendering them a rare sight.


The inspiration for the plastic stars in the poem draws directly from the very same glow-in-the-dark stars that adorn my ceiling. These little constellations, though made of plastic, hold a sentimental value, harking back to the days when they ignited my fascination with the cosmos. They serve as a poignant reminder of the beauty that lies beyond the city's luminescence.


Why did you choose to write this poem?


The recent stargazing trip at my friend's aunt's cottage stirred something deep within me. It reignited my passion for discussing the sheer beauty of the stars and highlighted the detrimental impact of light pollution on our ability to appreciate them fully.


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