Flicker - By: Sarah Asmali
- Poet2Poet

- 4 days ago
- 2 min read
Flicker… As light sounds
Go to sleep with the branches snap
The fire sizzles in fury of the night
The wind howls as they clap
Flicker…For the joyous creak
A happiness none of you speak
The greek fire shall be your future
Yet we ignore the flickers weak
Flicker….Like the napalm
The one we used for war
The one who shall set the bomb
Be calm they say
Then they're the first one at of the door
Flicker…As they wake up
In fear, horror, a feeling we can't tell
We must help those in need
Those children in need
And yet we wish them farewell
Flicker…Call them the greek fire
Say they light the spark
Those children, our future
Keep it all in the dark
Flicker…We shall speak for them
We shall stand
We shall do anything but die
And talk, and move
But we’ll float in their destiny
All in their bright sky
Flicker….The fire burns out
The bomb goes out
The spark is gone
And so is our doubt.
Please give a detailed explanation about the meaning and main idea of this poem.
The main idea of this poem to intensify those who are in chaos by fire or dont even have the right to sleep at night. It is to clarify and to support children in need who are blamed for others mistakes and those who got their back turned upon. It is to summarize what we have been doing all this time for them which isn't even the bare minimum.
Please explain your writing and thought process regarding this poem.
My writing and thought process for this was to use a sort of confusion in the start to talk about the idea of the poem vaguely until the middle, which then I intensified the idea of war and their mistakes. I then wanted to give recognition to those I was supporting so I mentioned the children in need. I ended the poem with the sad reality of our short attention span of doubts being gone.
Why did you choose to write this poem?
To spread awareness to the children we once promised would be our future even if it isn't going to do much or if we aren't going to do much those in need at least deserve to be thought of.
Do you have any tips or anything to share with the youth writers who may be reading this?
As Bertrand Russell once said
“War does not determine who is right — only who is left.”



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